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Deviation Actions

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1.
I'm done with you and your misplaced hate
Acting as if my happiness is yours to confiscate
I'm done with you deciding my fate
And you never getting your story straight
I'm done with you piling troubles onto my plate
Always calling me a worthless, godless ingrate
You think I don't see the arrogance in your gait?
So let's see if your knowledge is up to date

2.
Let's take you back, let's study this woe
Let's test this theory you think you know
Let's erase this divide between lady and beau
Let's see what we need to let peace flow
And the attraction from which will grow
The kind of love that sets your soul aglow

3.
When a kiss was a big deal, do you remember?
Those days you didn't understand a calender
When nothing revolved around your gender
When there was no need to be a pretender
Because everything was both tough and tender
When there was no stigma around 'I surrender'
Because everyone became your greatest defender
I wanted to put this up and see if anyone had any tips or suggestions. This is a style of writing I'm not quite used to as yet, so I think the flow is still quite off -- and let's not get started about the meter and other technical details. Any and all suggestions welcomed!
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